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ghost92bb
05-01-2005, 02:51 PM
Ok, here's my first entry into the love letter contest. Hope you like it, Karen :)

When I first laid my eyes upon you
My mouth went slack and dropped.
To see such wondrous beauty so true
It felt like time had stopped.

Your eyes, so sexy and flirty
Your lips, so soft and devine
Thoughts that are all so dirty
Flow through my awestruck mind

Thoughts of us together
Our bodies sweaty and entwined
Chocolate syrup, whip cream and feathers
Oh, such nuaghty and wicked times.

I long to taste you and kiss you
deep and oh so long
I want to touch you and tease you
All through our sweaty night.

I want to feel and hold you
My arms are firm and strong
I want you happy, to please you
And make it all alright.

I want to lie beside you
And between those legs so long
I want to make you "aahh" and "oohh"
To scream my name out, moan "OH GOD!!"

I want to taste you
Hold you open, spread you wide
I want to lick your morning dew
Devour all of you, cum inside.

If only this dream could be real
If it wasn't a simple please
I'd scream, "I LOVE YOU" with so much zeal
and be forever...happy :)


Well there it is...and I'll be adding some more love letters before the contest is over. Love you, Karen :D

Karen
05-01-2005, 04:59 PM
wow... the other guyz r goin to have a little comp! thanks hun that was perfect! made me a little hot even!! hehe :D

ghost92bb
05-01-2005, 06:47 PM
wow... the other guyz r goin to have a little comp! thanks hun that was perfect! made me a little hot even!! hehe :D

Thanks, Karen...I hope to have a couple more up before the end of the contest. Might not be poems, but I hope you like those too. Thanks again for the kind words :)

ghost92bb
05-10-2005, 01:52 AM
Here's another one

To loveyou
To be with you
Is a dream come true
To feel you
To touch you
Makes me lose the blues
To hold you
To caress you
Makes my heart flutter
To kiss you
To taste you
Its all I can do not to stutter
I want you
I need you
To make me whole
I yearn for you
I long for you
Please don't make me feel a fool
I scream for you
I cry for you
To be with you for all time
I love you
I need you
I need your heart to be mine.

How's that one?? :)

ghost92bb
05-10-2005, 02:02 AM
One more??

In the middle of the night
I cry out your name
tears streaming from my eyes
I reach for you
but you're not there...

I curse in frustration
And turn on my side...closing my eyes
And I feel you next to me..whispering
"I'm always here, lover...whenever you need me"

We kiss
Slow...soft..yielding
Then our kisses grow steamier..more passionate
Heated..tongues..teeth

Our hands explore our bodies
Finding pleasures in are most sensitive areas
Caresses...squeezing..grabbing..scratching
Til we both need more

Mouth on mouth
Mouth on breast...stomach...inner thighs
Lower..wetter..muskier..hotter
Pleasures of oral delights

Flesh on flesh
Skin rubbing against skin...heated
Sweaty..glistening...Softness..Hardness
Pleasures of the flesh

You moan..I groan
Our pleasure reaches its zenith
Worlds collide, explode...breath rushes out
We lay in a heap, bodies entwined...a sweaty mess

Then I awaken..alone again
And with out you again
But I smile to myself..turn on my side
And know you'll be forever mine...in my dreams

what do you think?

Karen
05-10-2005, 11:14 PM
GOD.... these r so good hun! it was between u and one other person that made it so hard to pick.... i am so sorry! if it could be the 2 of u it would have been alot easier. dont hate me... i really did love them.... the one that made it so hard was the 2 one! xoxo

ghost92bb
05-11-2005, 01:52 AM
GOD.... these r so good hun! it was between u and one other person that made it so hard to pick.... i am so sorry! if it could be the 2 of u it would have been alot easier. dont hate me... i really did love them.... the one that made it so hard was the 2 one! xoxo

Hey..can't hate you...at least I got a chance at having you to myself. And that you loved the poems and it was hard to pick..well that made it well worth it. Thank you for the chance..and to the winner...You da man!!

Love you, Karen :)